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Friday, April 24, 2026

Forevermore

Today, I read Diane Anderson, newtreemom's blog and found an interesting prompt from Ethical ELA's Verse Love challenge. Use the "first words" from a poem that inspired you. 

As many of my poetry and writing colleagues know, I have been bewildered by a new way of living since my husband passed suddenly last April. Writing is my way of dealing with loss and so I try to find time each day to unfold my thoughts. This day started out with what a person in the bereavement phase of life calls a grief burst.  You will find my poem starting with the first line of Rumi's poem, The Windowa raw piece of writing that opened my soul. I found the above image at Unsplash's free image collection. Then, I scrolled through blogs on love and loss and found a quote that reminded me that love is forevermore. "Love is the bridge between two hearts, and death cannot break a bridge built with such strong and lasting love." I share my poem with you.

LOVE AND LOSS

"Your body is away from me."     (1st line of Rumi's poem, The Window)
 Year two begins anew.
 Everlasting love remains,
 Tucked away in my heart
 Unexpectedly, grief 
 "Gushes in", flooding 
  My soul with sadness, 
  Changing my perspective.
  I pause in the warm sunlight.
 Tears quietly stream down,
 Like a rushing waterfall.
 Another "grief burst" 
 Finds its way, uprooting
 Years-old, seeded thoughts.
 Your heartnotes sprout
 Preserved in our gardens -
 Forevermore cherished 
 With eternal love. 
 draft, CVarsalona, 2026
                   I listened to this love song.

I have always been intrigued by dandelions and their puffballs' ability to fly through the air with one breathe-in, breathe-out blow. This week, when I saw a perfectly ready dandelion to make a wish, I ran right to the ground and picked the "wish weed" (what I have called the dandelion for years). I  photographed it before the seed heads spread across the lawn. 
←Thank you, Poetry Sisters, Tanita, Laura, Mary Lee, Liz, Sara, Tricia, and Kellyfor inviting "PoetryPals" to write an Ekphrastic Poem for the Poetry Sisters' monthly challenge.  
News of the Week: I happily checked my  Spring Seeds Grace April Padlet and found five poet friends, Bob Hamera, Ramona Behnke, Joyce Ray, Denise Krebs, and Verreno Diane Anderson, who added their creative image poems. There is still time to add your original artistic expression related to the theme. 

Click here to join our lovely host, Irene Latham, at her An Emily Dickinson Poetry Friday Roundup. Irene shares news on her new book, Some Starry Night, which "explores what might have happened if Emily Dickinson and Vincent van Gogh met in 1886 Paris. It's a re-imagining, as Emily never actually went to Paris or met Vincent. In actuality, she died May 15, 1886."

National Poetry Month
Day 24/30

16 comments:

  1. Thank you for sharing your grief burst with us, Carol. "Forevermore" love is my most favorite kind (and exactly what SOME STARRY NIGHT celebrates). Love the Rumi line, too. xo

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  2. Carol, it can't possibly have been a year! Oh, my goodness. I'm so glad you unfold yourself daily into poetry. Sending love on your continued journey. <3

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  3. Love "wish flower sprouts." Thanks for continuing to show us the power of poetry to heal as you continue on your journey, where bursts of grief can give way to moments of hope.

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  4. I just saw a post where a mother was explaining to her child that dandelion clocks are "wishies." Indeed, 'wish flower spouts' and I love the idea of blowing good wishes, love, and hope on the wind.

    I wish you peace as you continue to process your loss and what remains. ♥

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    1. Tanita, thank you for your comments and wishes of peace.

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  5. What a beautiful poem that shares so much grace in grief. Thank you for sharing. I know in difficult times, it may be hard to write. It's appreciated that you take the time to do so and share your journey.

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  6. Oh, Carol, a year. "The Window" is such a powerful prompt/beginning for your poem. The "rushing waterfall" of grief is so unpredictable. Hugs to you.

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  7. Very moving, Carol. The love shines through.

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  8. Carol, I know those grief bursts, how they come from out of nowhere and take you out at the knees. Thank God for the breathe-in/breathe-out of dandelions -- for the sheer process of directing all the gushing into a weed wish. <3

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  9. What a perfect description, "grief burst." I'm so glad you're carrying a love song with you into year two. I can't think of a better way to defend against grief.

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  10. Such a beautiful poem. It is clear that it arrived to you on waves of the love you still feel for your husband.

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    1. Mary Lee, I am feeling a surge of joy after reading your comment. Thank you so much.

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  11. Carol, what a beautiful poem you wrote about your forever love, and beginning the second year of his being gone. There are so many rich images in this part, my favorite:

    Another "grief burst"
    Finds its way, uprooting
    Years-old, seeded thoughts.
    Your heartnotes sprout
    Preserved in our gardens -

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