Showing posts with label nestlings. Show all posts
Showing posts with label nestlings. Show all posts

Thursday, October 15, 2020

Introducing Poemtober

 Stories are stitches of memories sewn together.

List created by Rebecca Herzog
"I would like, if I may, to take you on a strange journey.”

Please take a walk with me to view the enchanting, macabre, and bizarre front-yard decorations in my neighborhood. Displays entice me to create a #Poemtober collection of artistic expressions alongside my poet friend Rebecca Herzog with her prompt words. What I share in images each week may bring you to a state of delight or have you gawking in disbelief or shock.

I'll start by sharing my thinking on how to begin a Poemtober collection this year. Not only will I choose a word to prompt my thinking but I will pair it with a front yard decoration dressed in a seasonal look and perhaps digitize it to create a story of stitched memories.

Below you will find my first Poemtober sequence prompted by the word enchanting. While there are many Halloweenish displays going up around the neighborhood, I thought the word enchanting would be a great place to start. The word enchanting allows me to weave the boldness and vibrancy of the autumn season into poem.

One evening during a walk, I noticed the darkening colors of night surrounding the neighborhood houses. Trees were lurking in shadows as the sky opened to a speckling of stars. The title, October's Blackdraped Evening, came into being by pressing the words black and draped together to create a mood. Irene Latham does suggest this tip in her latest publication, This Poem Is A Nest. I took Irene's advice a step further and wrote my own next poem as the source text for nestlings, small poems originating from the nest poem.

Autumn whispers in the wind as evening
cozily closes under a blackdraped sky. 
Cricket sounds sing in tune with 
each other and rich-colored leaves
slip and slide across concrete walks
and roadways. Some, wet with afternoon
rain, wait for passersby to pick up
one or two for decorations.
Grey squirrels scamper 
in delight wondering where acorns
are stashed without noticing them
along the roadway. A few dogs proudly
lead their humans, bedazzled with 
masks, to greet fellow canines.
October's evening blush lingers as stars
speckle in an indigo sky and
enchanted eventide wishes
flow through crispclean air.
©CV, 2020

The nest poem is based on Using Irene Latham's book, This Poem Is A Nest, as the mentor text, I created my own nest and nestling poems. 

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Nestlings
I.
Wind whispers under stars.
October's leaves greet evening.
Enchanted delight
crispclean autumn!
II.
Autumn rain, scamper!
Wondering! Noticing!
Along roadway, evening lingers.
Stars speckle sky.
Enchanted wishes flow!
III.
autumn leaves scamper
noticing October's stars-
enchanted flow
IV.
wind cozily slides
in delight
where acorns greet
evening sky
©CV, 2020

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Stay tuned for the next installment of Poemtober.
It will not be for the faint of heart.

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Now, it is time for me to join the Poetry Friday Roundup. Janice Scully is the host today sharing some photos from Syracuse in Central New York, my home town. Ah, autumn there is lovely. Janice fills my heart with thoughts, original poems, and images of the season, ending with an inspirational quote. 

Friday, October 9, 2020

Nature Ushers In Autumn

In September did you watch how nature ushered in the fall season?  

On a particularly warm day, I noticed a simple leaf delicately falling to the ground.  Its dancestep movement drifted in with graceful choreography. A gentle puff of wind urged the tiny leaf to sway and swirl in a poised, descending manner. A quick swoosh of breeze added a touch of music to quicken the pace. I was in awe of nature's gentle touchdown to the ground.

sky ballerina
gracefully swirl in soft breeze
dancestep into fall
©CV, 2020

symmetrical leaf
landing upright with grace
autumn messenger
no ballet shoes required
stepdance into fall
©CV, 2020

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Craft Move
I took two words, dance and step, pressed them together, and created a new adjective to fit both my poems. Above the photo I attempted a haibun and below it a tanka. 
Thank you Irene Latham for Tips From a Nest Builder:  How To Find Nestlings in your new book, This Poem Is A Nest.  You can read more about Irene's unique poetry book at my book review on the #ThisPoemIsANest Blog Tour hereLeave a comment there and enter the raffle to win a copy of Irene's book. 

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In October, autumn felt its transformation.  The once sweltering pathways of summer  offered a coolcrisp, silent sanctuary for thought.  From nature trail to seaglass lake waters, earth's landscape prepared for the brilliance of autumn.  

Referring to Irene Latham's Nest Poem from This Poem Is A Nest
to write a nestling poem


Below is Irene Latham's nestling poem from This Poem Is A Nest
that offers a reflective lens.

Autumn

world settles
leaves puddle-

still, time hums
-Irene Latham, 2020

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Notebook Work

Adding my digitized photo of Hempstead Lake Park
in Rockville Centre where I live to the nestling poem I created.

Autumn Breath Nestling

breathe in the crispcool
woodsmoke season as leaves ballet
beneath oak hums
©CV, 2020, Long Island

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I'm joining the Poetry Friday Roundup in Switzerland this week at wee words for wee ones. Bridget Magee, our host is serving her once a week poetry treat for the young and the young at heart... 

Thursday, October 8, 2020

"This Poem Is A Nest" is Full of Wonderment

Autumn has appeared with its "coolcrisp"* days but for today summer still seems to be in the air with the debut of Irene Latham's newest book, This Poem Is A Nest.  Sunshine and warmth are bathed in this book's descriptive words and imaginative poetic nestlings.  "Delightful" is a single word of praise chosen by Kirkus to describe this engaging book so let's see why.          (*one of Irene Latham's lovely new "pressed together", unique words)

Come join me as I take a look at this small-sized, amazing poetry book, unlike others.  What is crafted inside is a beautiful 37-line poem taking the reader through the building of a nest in spring and developing the thoughts through the winter season.  From this imaginative beginning, 161 little nestlings, small poems, fly out not from robin blue eggs but from Irene Latham's creative writing talent.  Within the four source poems and the nestlings, Irene sparks joy, both for herself and the reader, while introducing a new concept, nest-poems.

"What fun to play with words, to arrange and rearrange, and to watch some of them learn to fly!"


I am honored to join a group of fellow bloggers reviewing Irene's beautiful book of joyful poetry that also showcases Johanna Wright's delightful illustrations.


Upon initially reading Irene's poetry book, I tweeted, "I am in wonderment over all the little nestling #poems coming from your central ones, Irene. Congratulations! " 

Irene responded, "'wonderment' was pretty much my state of being the entire time working on that book! (another word for 'joy," yes?)"


Now, let's look at Irene's book with the lens of teacher-writers who craft lessons for their flock of fledglings specifically to bring joy to their writing.  The strength of Irene's book lies not only in its uniqueness but in her ability to inspire and coach others to be creative and engage in word play.  A question to ask is how do we begin?  Irene encourages writers to find a starting point.  Using a nest such as Nest II: Summer leads writers to engage in creative word play and the crafting of smaller poems, an outgrowth of the original nest. 


Nestlings appear in Season Poems, or "Nest Abridged
->Summer<-

sky, empty - 

nothing more
than weave,

trill, buzz-

they wait for you

and also in The Color My World section.
->Yellow<--

honeybees thrum,
welcome home

One of the sections of the book that resonates with me is Tips From A Nest Builder: How To Find Nestlings.  This advice/coaching section provides writers with a plan to quickly engage in an adventure into writing.  Select a word to wrap your small poem around and add a chain of words from the original nest to fit your subject.  The next step allows for creative word play. "Just like birds build their nest with whatever is available to them-straw, shoelaces, paper, mud!-you, too, can be inventive."  More tips are provided before adding words of wisdom: "Nurture your nestings.  Fly!"


For those who love words, there are alphabet poems, wordplay poems, and definition poems that allow young writers to have fun with format, white space, and words.


H is for Hive 

hope hinges 
happy house-- 

honeybees hear 

home!
              heart!
                            harbor! 




Between its pages, This Poem Is A Nest is filled with inspiration and hope for writers to be as inventive as they choose to be.

As you open your heart to this experience, I hope you will find that there is nothing more joyful than discovering yourself and the world in a poem-nest. -Irene Latham

I sing praises for Irene Latham's inspired creativeness as a poem-nest originator.  Now, just like school children release their butterflies, I let go of my summer nestlings on this autumn day to fly into the world of social media.  Thank you, Irene, for the joyful experience of discovering a new poetic diversion during our pandemic life.



May your writing journey be filled with many nest experiences
that bring you a sense of wonderment.

Special Announcement: 

Boyds Mills and Kane, publisher of Irene Latham's book, offers a raffle prize of This Poem Is A Nest to one person who comments about Irene Latham's book in the section below. The winner will be announced at the end of the weekend.  All responders need to add their street address in the comment section along with their response.